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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I will only point out the mistakes, as I'm only critiques things I like, and if I'm critiquing, you know I like it for sure.
The hands and feet are a bit confus, it's unclear what's going on exactly. It took me some time to differentiate between fingers, maybe they look too alike? As for the feet, the forward feet looks implausible in perspective.
The lines could've been left out or just coloured in a softer, more organic colour - the abdomen lines stand out compared to the soft colouring surrounding it.
The legs - her thighs look bulky, especially the left one. Knees are sorta weird, withdrawn maybe.
Her balance looks off, as if she's leaning to the left side.
Oh, and the leather stripes aren't in the same positions, but that happens with irl suits as well...
Leather colouring is great, skin colouring is good with the exception of backlight, which seems too abrupt at times.
I don't like the OMG SHINEY on the hair either, but that might've been in the request.
Face looks fine to me, the nose might be overdefined (again with the lineart)
Oh, and her eyebrows stand out a bit much.
That's it for this piece, I guess. Also, OMG SHINEY LEATHER BOOBS!
Kudos for tits looking realistic.
et en lines? ça donne quoi?
Je suis sur il faudrait que tu ty mette!tu as du potentiel...serieusement!